Other day I saw you at the mall after a long time and waved.
You waved back and told something to your husband pointing me. I said “She’s my friend” to wife, She smiled and replied “She’s very pretty”.
I continued “and thats her husband. Don’t they look great together just made for each other “.
PS: This is my first attempt at 55-Fiction (55 word story) hence comments are eagerly awaited. Meanwhile you can read some exotic 55ers here. Most of which are penned by Pal.
PPS: This can also be read as prequel or sequel to “We are just Friends“
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Jul 09, 2009 @ 14:46:58
never read a 55-fiction before … lol … still wondering how to react 😀
Dhiman : Try reading them in the link above some of them are really nice I am also pretty new to the concept so don’t know it fared ….
Jul 09, 2009 @ 15:31:48
Hmmm.. the othr day read sum 55ers on some blogging community. Intersting concept… nd yeah as 4 u, a nice beginning 🙂 think of trying one 4 myslf. will be sum relief 4 my readers 😉
Dhiman: Thanks Buddy !!! Will be looking forward for your 55ers 🙂
Jul 09, 2009 @ 23:34:09
hey just wrote the 55-er but will post a bit later:)
nd yeah read the prequel 2 this 55-er. its beautiful. left a comment there too!
Dhiman: Wow Gr8 !!! Post your 55-er fast buddy looking forward to it 🙂
Jul 09, 2009 @ 18:41:09
Wow! That’s an interesting post and concept! Cool! I like it!
Dhiman: Its a very challenging concept too specially for a person like me who has tendency to pack my posts with lots of words 🙂
Jul 09, 2009 @ 21:56:21
Cool concept…you invented it???
Loved it….nice story also
Dhiman: Thank you for the comments. Well the idea was proposed by New Times founder and publisher Steve Moss(info: wikipedia). I came to know of it recently and ever since was trying it but was not able to limit my ideas within 55 words
Jul 10, 2009 @ 00:08:56
Hey i love this style yaar…….i am gonna try out too would be great fun 🙂
Dhiman: Certainly give it a try …I am sure you’ll do a good job 😀
Jul 11, 2009 @ 11:02:03
Arey suno i need your mail id yaar, ye kya hai ganda sa wordpress yahaan kuch samajh mein bhi nahi aata…..blogger is so much easier and comprehensible 🙂
Dhiman: I have sent you the email already 😀
Jul 10, 2009 @ 03:25:56
short and interesting
like it
Dhiman: Thanks Sm for reading and appreciating
Jul 11, 2009 @ 14:48:11
Hmmmm you are becoming quite a storyteller, I must say!
Khub bhalo!
P.S. You have been tagged, yet again!
Check out my latest post: “More tags… One down, 2 more to go!” for further info…
Dhiman: Thank you !!! Thanks for Tagging me once again…I’ll do it soon
Jul 12, 2009 @ 09:57:24
Oh! Tough concept! Not for ppl like me! 1055 words would have been more plausible for me!
Dhiman: Kaddu Welcome back !!! 😀 I too thought it difficult but you can try it its fun 😉
Jul 21, 2009 @ 09:17:35
Well written Dhiman ! Writing a story in 55 words isnt easy.
I dont think I’ll be good at this. Well, no harm in trying ! Lets see. I am bad wen it comes to less words.
Dhiman : Thanks you very much for the compliment…. its difficult but if you try you can … I too am not a person of less words but somehow it happened 😀 … So do try it its fun …
Jul 29, 2009 @ 03:42:19
This was very sweet. I have never done the 55 fiction either. But you conveyed a lot in just a few words.
Dhiman: Thanks for the compliment. Toya you can try it too. As I have been saying everyone and they did a great job. I think too can do it very well…
Aug 21, 2009 @ 12:37:14
Good one. Every man needs to tell the last line if he is with his wife or gf .:P
Dhiman: Welcome on board !!! Yeah thats the only option 😉
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